A meal
I was invited to my best friend kiki ‘s birthday party. I prepared a gift for her. She prepared a big meal for me and other friends at the café shop.
At first we went to the café shop. It was rainy outside but luckily we were already inside the café, which can open our birthday party. The café shop look like good and there waiter was very nice to us.
We ordered two of the set meals which included six soft drinks, four box of cheese with sausage, my favorite chocolate ice cream, salmon salad, whisky chicken wings and four pizzas. The set meal was around two thousand dollars. I thought that was little bit expensive, but we liked the taste of the food very much.
By the time, we forgot birthday cake for kiki at the moment. Kiki felt unhappy on that thing. Because she want make a wish at the birthday cakes, which felt up set of all.
Suddenly, the waiter put the cakes on the table, he sald it is special offer tor us. Than kiki was smile at it time. She can make a wish at birthday cake. However, we enjoyed at a meal.
Finally, I was happy in our party for kiki birthday with us. We had a nice meal and funny day . I hope in the net year kiki ‘birthday party. I can join again. but I will bought the cake of sure.
急有英文好的朋友幫忙修改一下嗎明天測驗用T.T?
2019-10-29 1:20 am
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2019-10-29 8:33 am
A meal.
----Errors and corrections are in brackets(in parenthesis).All should be in past tenses.
----I was invited to my best friend kiki's anniversary birthday party.I prepared a gift for her. She prepared a big meal for me and other friends at the caf'e shop.
----At first we went to the caf'e shop.It was rainy outside but luckily we were already inside the caf'e, (which opened the celebration meeting )for our birthday party. The caf'e shop looked (good) and there the waiter was very (agreeable) to us.
----We ordered two of the set meals, (which included six soft drinks, four boxes) of cheese in the sausages ; my favorite chocolate ice cream, salmon salads, whisky chicken wings and four pizzas.The set meal was around two thousand dollars. I thought that (that) was a (little) expensive.(However, we liked the taste of the food very much.)
----(By that time), we forgot the birthday cake for kiki's. kiki felt (unhappy and upset).(on that matter) because (she wanted) (make a wish on the birthday cake).
----Suddenly, the waiter (tried)put the cake on the table. (He) said (it was a) special offer for us. (Then) kiki was( pleased) (with a smile on her face) at that time. She could make a wish on the birthday cake. However, we enjoyed (and took delight also at the meal)
---Finally, I was happy in our party for kiki's birthday with us. We had a nice meal and funny day (on this occasion).I hope (next, not net) year's kiki birthday party, I can join again, but I'll (certainly) (brought) the cake (with me) (for )sure.
----Errors and corrections are in brackets(in parenthesis).All should be in past tenses.
----I was invited to my best friend kiki's anniversary birthday party.I prepared a gift for her. She prepared a big meal for me and other friends at the caf'e shop.
----At first we went to the caf'e shop.It was rainy outside but luckily we were already inside the caf'e, (which opened the celebration meeting )for our birthday party. The caf'e shop looked (good) and there the waiter was very (agreeable) to us.
----We ordered two of the set meals, (which included six soft drinks, four boxes) of cheese in the sausages ; my favorite chocolate ice cream, salmon salads, whisky chicken wings and four pizzas.The set meal was around two thousand dollars. I thought that (that) was a (little) expensive.(However, we liked the taste of the food very much.)
----(By that time), we forgot the birthday cake for kiki's. kiki felt (unhappy and upset).(on that matter) because (she wanted) (make a wish on the birthday cake).
----Suddenly, the waiter (tried)put the cake on the table. (He) said (it was a) special offer for us. (Then) kiki was( pleased) (with a smile on her face) at that time. She could make a wish on the birthday cake. However, we enjoyed (and took delight also at the meal)
---Finally, I was happy in our party for kiki's birthday with us. We had a nice meal and funny day (on this occasion).I hope (next, not net) year's kiki birthday party, I can join again, but I'll (certainly) (brought) the cake (with me) (for )sure.
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