中文:
我的名字是Zachary。
我来自彰化。
現在在新北市工作。
我是一名設計師
我畫室內設計圖以及和客户溝通。
在我搬到新北市之前，我在2014年4月到2015年7月是位動畫師。
我和我的朋友在台中了成立了一個動畫團隊。
但很快,
我了解到沒有足夠的經驗與技術。
是很難去維持一個團隊運作
所以我在2016年回到了新北市。
並且為自己設定了两個目標。
學好英文和成为一名好的動畫師
而且我還在努力中
英文:
My name is Zachary.
I am from Changhua.
Now ,I work in new Taipei city.
I am a designer.
//I'm painting interior design and communicate with customers.
Before I moved to New Taipei city, I was an animator from April 2014 to July 2015.
I set up an animation team with my friends in Taichung.
But soon.
//I realized without not enough experience and sufficient technology .
//It is difficult to keep a team operation
So I returned to new Taipei city in 2016.
And set two goals for myself.
Learn English well and become a good animator.
And I am still working on it.
請英文高手能幫我修正一下簡短的自我介紹嗎?
2019-09-08 6:29 pm
回答 (2)
2019-09-09 2:00 am
1. 太多短句 顯得無趣
2. 太多句子 以 I (我)開頭.
> My name is Zachary.
> I am from Changhua.
This is Zack, originally from Changhua city.
> Now ,I work in new Taipei city.
> I am a designer.
> //I'm painting interior design and communicate with customers.
Right now, as a professional interior designer, I am responsible for design production and customer communications.
> Before I moved to New Taipei city, I was an animator from April 2014 to July 2015.
> I set up an animation team with my friends in Taichung.
In April 2014, a few friends of mine and myself started up an animation studio in Taichung city. I took on the responsibilities of animator for more than a year until July 2015 when I left the company and moved to NTC.
> But soon.
> //I realized without not enough experience and sufficient technology .
> //It is difficult to keep a team operation
During that start-up, I quickly learned a few do's and don'ts, one by heart - nothing is more important than professional experiences and critical technology support.
> So I returned to new Taipei city in 2016.
> And set two goals for myself.
> Learn English well and become a good animator.
> And I am still working on it.
Here, then, I came to NTC in 2016. Two goals I vowed to achieve - proficiency in English and excellency in professional animator skills.
additions I am suggesting:
the progresses I have made and current status:
Since then, I have passed XX level 7 English exams and got certified by Taiwanese Animator Society as a master animator. My plan is to give the start-up another try in the next few years so that I can run my own company.
2. 太多句子 以 I (我)開頭.
> My name is Zachary.
> I am from Changhua.
This is Zack, originally from Changhua city.
> Now ,I work in new Taipei city.
> I am a designer.
> //I'm painting interior design and communicate with customers.
Right now, as a professional interior designer, I am responsible for design production and customer communications.
> Before I moved to New Taipei city, I was an animator from April 2014 to July 2015.
> I set up an animation team with my friends in Taichung.
In April 2014, a few friends of mine and myself started up an animation studio in Taichung city. I took on the responsibilities of animator for more than a year until July 2015 when I left the company and moved to NTC.
> But soon.
> //I realized without not enough experience and sufficient technology .
> //It is difficult to keep a team operation
During that start-up, I quickly learned a few do's and don'ts, one by heart - nothing is more important than professional experiences and critical technology support.
> So I returned to new Taipei city in 2016.
> And set two goals for myself.
> Learn English well and become a good animator.
> And I am still working on it.
Here, then, I came to NTC in 2016. Two goals I vowed to achieve - proficiency in English and excellency in professional animator skills.
additions I am suggesting:
the progresses I have made and current status:
Since then, I have passed XX level 7 English exams and got certified by Taiwanese Animator Society as a master animator. My plan is to give the start-up another try in the next few years so that I can run my own company.
2019-09-10 8:18 am
From Taiwan Animator Society to master animator.
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