請幫我做簡單的英文自界健檢!?

2019-03-06 12:41 pm
因要前往動物領域工作,需要一份簡單的英文自我介紹,本人英文很差,有擬了一份英文自界,想請英文大神協助健檢,另外請協助推薦可學習發音念句子的網站,麻煩英文大神了 謝謝!

以下是我自己擬的英文自界:
good afternoon, my name is john , I am 26 -years old, born in New Taipei City ,
I’ve always wanted to work in the animal field because i have a passion,
I think I’m a good fit for this job,
I love animals and I hope to combine work and interest.
I am very patient and caring.
I feel like i'm ready to take on anything.
I'm the right person you are looking for. Thanks

回答 (2)

2019-03-07 9:31 am
✔ 最佳答案
修正如下,請參考。

Good afternoon, my name is john , I am 26 years old, born in New Taipei City ,I always desire to work in the animal field, because I have a passion for that, I think I’m good fit for this job, for I love animals , very patient and caring.

I hope to combine work and interest in my career. I feel like I’m totally ready to take on the challenge, I believe that I'm the right person you are looking for. Thanks for your attention.
2019-03-09 12:02 pm
May I introduce myself as John and being born in New Taipei City; at present, I am 26 of age.
It is my wish to work in the animal husbandry field because I have a passion of that and thought that is
suitable for my future career too, In addition, I have a kind of love towards animals especially the livestock and it is my hope that 'll nurture and treated them as my hobbies. Yip


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