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Chain-store means one of many retail shops owned and controlled by the same company
means the same as
A chain is a company that has lots of its stores in towns and cities sometimes around the world where
its=controlled by the same company where its="possessive adjective" of it.
-----sometimes even around the world=even="adverb" used to compare between what happened to the very nature of what may follows=around the world (even).
-----A chain is a company that has lots of its stores in towns and cities sometimes around the world in formal writing might be add in"its" and "even" ,according to commercial custom, regular grammar, and in good writing-reading order and usage.

A chain of company that has lots of its stories in towns and cities around the world==A company that has specially right ot franchise for operation of wholesale business.該公司或商店擁有連鎖店的特賣權藉著他的分公司銷售產品. Yip

A chain is a company that has lots of its stores in towns and cities sometimes around the world.
=> A chain is a company that has lots of stores in towns and cities sometimes around the world.

1. its 的移除 是可以的.文法上與語意上都是可以接受的.

2. 但是 原句 本來就有語意上的問題 就是 "in towns and cities"是不必要的廢語.stores 不 "in towns and cities"還會有其他可能嗎? 應該改成:

A retail chain is a company that has lots of its stores in many towns, sometimes, around the world.