我這樣還原分詞構句有錯嗎,如果有錯,請問錯在哪?

2018-12-01 10:21 am
題目(1)Sally waved goodbye to us,with tears running down her cheeks.

我還原的:Sally waved goodbye to us and her tears ran down her cheeks.

(2) Tina looked at me with her eye filled with tears.

我還原的:Tina looked at me and her eye was filled with tears.

(3)Mom is sitting on the bed,with her eyes closed.

我還原的:Mom is sitting on the bed and her eyes were closed.

回答 (3)

2018-12-03 1:23 am
✔ 最佳答案
1. While Sally waved us goodbye, tears were running down her cheeks.
眼淚就是眼淚,何必說是她的呢?難道會是我的眼淚 流到她的臉上了嗎?

2. Tina's eyes filled with tears while she was looking at me.
當然是淚滿雙眼 有人會 用單眼來哭嗎?
還有-這裡應該用主動 應該是沒有人拿水壺來灌溉 她的眼睛的.

3. While Mom is sitting on the bed, her eyes are closed.
眼睛閉著 是不必用進行式的.
2018-12-01 6:02 pm
A complex sentence contains a subordinate clause as one of its constituents.
In the complex sentence (1) (2) (3) the subordinate clause functions as a direct object of the verb "waved,looked, is sitting.."
The clause is introduced by the subordinator "whose",pronoun, used in of whom the one belonging to which person.
(1)Sally waved good bye to us, with tears running down her cheeks:-
Sally (whose tears running down her cheeks)-------complex sentence---subor.cl.function as Indirect to verb(waved) as adj.cl. qualifying Sally----S; whose "waved goodbye to us"------->(V+DO)remains.
Sally (with tears running down her cheeks)----->simple sentence, consists only one adj.clause qualifying Sally----S
waved good bye to us---->V+O)
(2) Tina looked at me with her eye filled with tears:-
Tina (whose eye filled with tears)---->complex sent. subor cl, Indirect to verb (looked) as adj cl. qualifying Tina----S
whose "looked at me"------>(V+DO)remains.
Tina (with her eye filled with tears)----->simple sentence,consists only one adj cl.qualifying "Mom"---S
looked at me---->(V+O.)
(3)Mom with her eyes closed, is sitting on the bed.
Mom (whose eyes are closed)----->complex, subor.cl being indirect to "is sitting on the bed", qualifying "Mom"--subject
whose "is sitting on the bed"----->(V+DO)remains
Mom (with her eyes closed)---simple sent. with only one adj.cl.qualifying Mom----S
is sitting on the bed------>(V+O)
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A compound sentence consists of two or more clauses at the same grammatical level.
Each of the clause is a main cl.typically an independent sentence,ie (1)(2)(3) as you recovered in each that the two main clauses are linked by the co-ordinator "and"----don't use too much,namely the recovered"compound".
2018-12-01 2:28 pm
句子分簡單句,複合句,複雜句都正確,你是將複雜句改為複合句均正確,惟句子要求筒單正確為原則,否則可變化多樣
Sally with tears running down her cheeks waved goodbye to us.
Sally whose tears running down her cheeks waved goodbye to us.
Sally waved goodbye to us,whose tears running down her cheeks.
With tears running down her cheeks,Sally waved goodbye to us.


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