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I agree with David and Speed. You don't need to worry about length when you're just getting all your thoughts down. It's a draft. After you distance yourself from your work, it'll be a lot easier to see where you should trim stuff down. You're not as attached to all the feelings and ideas you wanted to convey then. You are more focused on what's actually coming across to you as a reader.
That distance is very important though. Try to give yourself at least a few weeks or months away from your work before you begin serious editing. I can almost guarantee that you'll have plenty of unnecessary "fat" that you need to trim down. It's not a sign of being a bad writer. It's just that good writing is concise. This doesn't mean that you should have short scenes, paragraphs, sentences, etc. It means that everything is only as long as it needs to be and no longer. It means your scenes that aren't adding anything significant to the story (or disrupting the pace of the story) are taken out or modified.
I had an English teacher who talked about the publishing business once and he mentioned cutting about 25% of the original draft out. Kind of a frightening number, but once you start evaluating your work and pinpointing where the fat is—it's not as bad as it seems. Before you start editing, just jot down your draft's original word count and see how much falls off each time you edit. It's personally not too hard for me to shave off a couple hundred words when I do some light editing. If you're having trouble getting rid of stuff, get some feedback from people and do more trimming on your next edits.