求轉校自薦信英文格式（急！）?

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------No.1000,Nathan Rd.,
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Whole Block,
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------3/F
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Kln,
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------July 17,2018.

The Headmaster,
South Island School,
No.33 Island Rd.
Sunbeam,
Repulse Bay,
HK

Dear Mr. Wisedom,
As I (--your name --) have completed my exam S1-S2 at (xxxx) middle school with very good grades,I should be most grateful if the headmaster of the Island School could consider this self-recommended transfer student letter for the S2-S6 terms. My elder brothers and friends, peers have been studying in your school with very good results for the past years. I am, therefore, seriously request to join your school renowned for very good students and teachers relationship; Also I am the captain of the school basketball-football teams in my after-school extra-curricular activities and sports.I have learnt many particular skill and subjects in drama, languages, swimming, riding etc. in my former school former class of S1-S2. I am awarded my House Colours also....My teachers agree to write a reference for me.
If you are kind enough to accept my transference from old to the new,I am willing for an interview at any time. Your consideration and approval on this matter will be greatly appreciated.
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------Yours respectfully,
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------(your name )
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------(date)

To headmaster of so and so school,
May I introduce of myself, being so and so, 15 and studying in form 1 and going to form 2. of so and so national middle school.
As a matter of fact that, because my family have moved to another place which is far from my present school and then, I need to travel for at least one hour or so to get there. In order to prevent that happened and I do wish to study in your school not only because of save time to study but also having a good choice. Finally, your consideration and approval on this matter will be deeply appreciated. Thank you. Yours sincerely, Name______ Phone _______ Address_________Date________ Yip