請問下方的英文翻譯有沒有文法上的錯或者是很奇怪？ （求英文翻譯高手?

1. A life cannot be wasted. Every moment of it counts.

2. I will be there whenever you want me.

(1)Life will not go in vain(=without use, value, meaning);
---every step counts(=All our life was in vain without due reverence).

(2)I will be on your side(=come to)-----a clause with its own subject;
----"whenever" you need me.------dependent clause
----whenever--adv--at whatever time = whenever you like----at any time;
----when---interrogative adv.=at what time , eg:- "When can you come ?"

1.人生沒有白走的路 每一步都算數
Life will not (be wasted) (for) every step counts.
上句之for 是"因為"的意思。

2.當你需要我 不管何時我都會到你的身邊
(Whenever) you need me , I will (stay by your side)

人生沒有白走的路,每一步都要計算==As far as life being concerned, there won't be any step in vain or uncounted for. Yip

1.人生沒有白走的路 每一步都算數

我譯:
1.Life does not go in vein, every step counts.

原譯：
Life will not waste,
評：頭句英文文法已錯，因為Life不是人，亦不會主動做動詞(浪費)，所以全錯。

2.當你需要我 不管何時我都會到你的身邊
我譯：
2.I will be on your side whenever you need me.

原譯：
When you need me whenever I will come
反翻譯測試=任何時間我將要來到之時你便需要我。
原意是"我需要你時你會來"，所以跟原意看似主客相反了，雖然表面字對字來看好像是翻譯了中文句的每隻字，但由於句意結構，when跟whenever在英文語意上不需重用，因為need you意義上已implied(包含)"當"我需要"時"等等不用譯出的中文字。

1.人生沒有白走的路 每一步都算數

About 人生的路 ~ road of life
You may probably think that you would waste (the effort for) some steps, as you walk along your road of life; however,
no one would take any steps for nothing (白走) in one's "road of life".

(putting into passive voice for general case):
(a) No steps would be taken for nothing in one's road of life as every step counts.
(b) No steps would be wasted in life as every step counts. (simplified)

(note - "浪費生命" wasting lives or a life 應該不是原意!)

2.當你需要我 不管何時我都會 "到" 你的身邊
I will come to you whenever you need me.