Native english speakers ! Are there any grammatical errors in my song lyrics ? Can you help me please ?

2018-04-18 1:22 am
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"My dream is to travel through different places
I want to know the whole world and all the nations
I want to know people from a different culture
And sail the seven seas looking for adventure

(chorus)
I want to travel around the world
I want to sail the seven seas


I wish I could travel to another city
I also want to go to another country"






Are there any grammatical errors in my song lyrics ?

回答 (4)

2018-04-18 1:27 am
Grammar rules don't really apply to song lyrics. It's called "poetic licence" and that means that you have permission to break the rules. In poetry rhythm and rhyme are more important than grammar (i.e. I would work on that instead).
2018-04-18 3:28 pm
no
2018-04-18 1:26 am
One usually says, travel TO different places.
2018-04-18 1:23 am
yep


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