I wrote a creative writing short story about a woman at her daughters funeral and she is looking around trying to think of who she thinks her daughter’s killer was. But at the end there’s a twist and the murderer was the mother all along and was only thinking about everyone else’s motive to see who she could pin the blame on.
My English teacher said it was really good with a good twist at the end but what I don’t understand about his advice was he also said “Could you use a prop of reflection/mirror to show that the narrator is the murderer/bully?”. We have to redraft our essays but I don’t understand this critique. Can anyone help? Thanks