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Something I drafted in english that could be translated: "I wanted to thank you for taking the time to talk with me today. I enjoyed learning more about the company and where it is headed, and would love the opportunity to join your team and help it grow and succeed. Please let me know if there is anything else you need, and I look forward to hearing back from you!" My Chinese is mostly colloquial and informal, so any help is appreciated! Thank you again :)