Native speakers of English, could you help me?

2018-01-08 5:09 am
I have to translate a cruise ship information for passengers. Which of the following version of the warning sounds better?

Touching the onboard safety equipment is strictly prohibited.

It is strictly prohibited to tamper with the onboard safety equipment.

回答 (4)

2018-01-08 5:29 am
DO NOT TOUCH OR TAMPER WITH THE ONBOARD SAFETY EQUIPMENT!
2018-01-08 5:20 am
Second one is very good.
2018-01-08 11:00 am
Tampering/touching on board safety equipment is strictly prohibited
2018-01-08 5:35 am
First one


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