我英文很差勁 但我有個功課 要修正所有的錯誤文法 文法是現代式的?

Error and correction in Present Tense:-eg:-
(1)The fog will be cleared when the sun "rises"
---If Fatty the Poster "fails" again, he will give up DSE.
---Both verbs express future actions.due to adverb clauses of time and condition;despite Present Tense.
------Fatty's trousers "seem" to be too short&fat !
------Tell me how you "feel" !!!
------The verbs "seem"--"feel"--agree--consists of----forgive---know--"seem----feel" are seldom used in the continuous tense, but Present Tense.
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"The present,the present time,the time now passing".In Grammar the present tense at present=now ,has the eg:-We don't need any more at Present for Fatty's sake !!!
----------eg:-for the present{-eg:-for the time being, as far as the present is concerned eg:-That will be enough for the Present for the silly poster Fatty.

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