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My name is Jyet, and I m from *** University.
I consider myself a helpful and easygoing person, no matter where I am, I always get along with friends very well. In my spare time, I always keep on learning new things to increase my ability and broaden my horizons. Other than that, I ve done many kinds of part-time jobs and volunteer works. I m now working as a promotion girl for *** Company, which allows me to get hands-on experience about communicating with people and solving problems.
A little bit about me personally is that I ve been to London for study in the summer vacation when I was 16. Although I didn t stay there for a long time, it still led me to believe that I m good at getting along with different kinds of people and adapting well to new situations. That s why my friends often say that I m a flexible person and I d also like to think that I am.
According to my experiences and characters, I hope I can have chance to develop my interests and capabilities here. Thank you!
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2017-10-09 4:44 pm
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2017-10-09 8:39 pm
(1)My name is Janet.
(2)No matter where I am, I always get along,,,,
(3)It still leads me to believe/expect/understand that I am good at getting along....
(4)that I am a flexible and adaptable person.(no need --and I'd also like to think that I am.------)
(2)No matter where I am, I always get along,,,,
(3)It still leads me to believe/expect/understand that I am good at getting along....
(4)that I am a flexible and adaptable person.(no need --and I'd also like to think that I am.------)
2017-10-10 9:40 am
1. I am from : 我來自某區域, 如台灣等，如你想寫的是已於那畢業，應是I graduated from the XXX university in 20??.
2. “, no matter where”是可微調標點符號成 “. And no matter …”.
3. A little bit about me personally is that I’ve been to London to study in the summer vacation when I was 16.
去London 讀書是經歷，”A little bit” 用在起頭語有點怪，感覺上你不願意多講，你英文很好，這部分建議調整。另通常是 to study in the summer …，感覺上還沒到需用for的層次。
還有妳句子後面既然用when I was 16，之前的時態是不是要用過去式?
4. It still led me to believe 用過去式? 有用still 應是沒變啊，何
不用現在完成式 – it has led me.
5. “a flexible person” 在沒有前後詞補述下，如同中文只說我很
彈性(柔軟)，意思不明?是身體柔軟還是身段柔軟? 這部分
建議酌補充幾個字便可或調整
6. have chance 改為 have a(the) chance 較具體，不加冠詞的
by chance 是運氣 - Longman
2. “, no matter where”是可微調標點符號成 “. And no matter …”.
3. A little bit about me personally is that I’ve been to London to study in the summer vacation when I was 16.
去London 讀書是經歷，”A little bit” 用在起頭語有點怪，感覺上你不願意多講，你英文很好，這部分建議調整。另通常是 to study in the summer …，感覺上還沒到需用for的層次。
還有妳句子後面既然用when I was 16，之前的時態是不是要用過去式?
4. It still led me to believe 用過去式? 有用still 應是沒變啊，何
不用現在完成式 – it has led me.
5. “a flexible person” 在沒有前後詞補述下，如同中文只說我很
彈性(柔軟)，意思不明?是身體柔軟還是身段柔軟? 這部分
建議酌補充幾個字便可或調整
6. have chance 改為 have a(the) chance 較具體，不加冠詞的
by chance 是運氣 - Longman
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