The sky is getting darker and darker, fewer and fewer people on the street, the bigger the snow, the little girl's heart is more and more empty, just as the little girl lying on the corner of the corner, a group of black people block in front of her.The little girl quickly stretched out the already frostbite hand, holding the match "Do ... do you interested in buying my match?" Little girl trembling"I'm not interested!" A black man waved the matchbox and smiled with no intention. "I'm only interested in the money in your pocket!"Little girl staring eyes,and quickly hand pocket; black people around the little girl."I warn you, obediently give me the money, or die!" The black man roared.The little girl angrily back to the roar "I do not!"After Black people severely beat her, the little girl has been unable to struggle, the black people immediately took away her money, sped away.The little girl suddenly felt the world is very desperate, she sighed, sad thought, why other people can live happily, but she have to bear the hardships in the winter to sell matches, it is unfair!The little girl is on the corner and sleeping.
天色越來越暗,街上的人越來越少,大雪越下越大,小女孩的心也越來越空虛,正當小女孩虛弱的躺在街角邊時,一群黑衣人擋在她面前。
小女孩趕緊伸出早已凍傷的手,手上握著火柴「請…請問你們有興趣買我的火柴嗎?」小女孩顫抖著問
「我沒興趣!」一個黑衣人揮掉火柴盒,然後不懷好意的笑著「我只對妳口袋裡的錢有興趣!」
小女孩瞪大眼睛,趕緊用手護著口袋;黑衣人彈彈手指,其他黑衣人團團圍著小女孩。
「我警告妳!乖乖把錢交出來!不然就等著***!」黑衣人老大大吼一聲。
小女孩憤怒的回吼「我不要!」
黑衣人狠狠把她打了一頓後,小女孩已經無力掙扎,黑衣人隨即搶走了她的錢,揚長而去。
小女孩頓時覺得世界十分絕望,她嘆了口氣,悲傷的心想,為什麼大家都可以過得快樂,過得幸福,但自己卻得承受在寒冬中賣火柴的辛苦,真是太不公平了!
小女孩依在街角,沉沉睡去。
~急~請幫忙改一下以下的文章,有中英對照,改英文的就好了,謝謝?
2017-08-25 7:44 am
回答 (1)
2017-08-25 8:33 pm
A tragic event or situation makes the translation E&C feels very sad,especially because it involves death and suffering and lamenting for the tragic death,for the tragic heroine .
Errors and Corrections are found in brackets(-----):-eg:-
----The sky is getting darker and darker (and fewer and fewer people are) on the street. The bigger the snow (seems to make and suffer) the little girl's (empty) heart more and more.
----Just as the little girl (is lying) on the corner, a group of black people block in front of her. The little girl (is quickly stretching out)the already frostbitten hand, holding the match and( saying in trembling),
"Are....are you interested in buying my match?"
"I'm not interested!"
A blackman waves (away)the matchbox and (smiles) with no intention.
"I'm only interested in the money in your pocket!"
The little girl, with staring eyes, has quickly been covering her handpocket.The black people (surround) her say,
"I warn you, give me the money obediently or (get die !)"
The blackman is roaring.
"I do not !"
The little girl is angrily replying to the roar.
----(Having been beaten severely by the black people), the little girl has been unable to struggle. The black people immediately take away all her money and speed away.
----The little girl suddenly (feels ) that the world is very desperate. She is sighing and thinking very sad, especially because (it involves other people's enjoying happy life), but she is (bearing the hardship and suffering in the winter) to sell matches.
It is unfair !----(an expression of feeling)
The little girl is seen on the corner (lamenting for her tragic loss and tragic death).
Errors and Corrections are found in brackets(-----):-eg:-
----The sky is getting darker and darker (and fewer and fewer people are) on the street. The bigger the snow (seems to make and suffer) the little girl's (empty) heart more and more.
----Just as the little girl (is lying) on the corner, a group of black people block in front of her. The little girl (is quickly stretching out)the already frostbitten hand, holding the match and( saying in trembling),
"Are....are you interested in buying my match?"
"I'm not interested!"
A blackman waves (away)the matchbox and (smiles) with no intention.
"I'm only interested in the money in your pocket!"
The little girl, with staring eyes, has quickly been covering her handpocket.The black people (surround) her say,
"I warn you, give me the money obediently or (get die !)"
The blackman is roaring.
"I do not !"
The little girl is angrily replying to the roar.
----(Having been beaten severely by the black people), the little girl has been unable to struggle. The black people immediately take away all her money and speed away.
----The little girl suddenly (feels ) that the world is very desperate. She is sighing and thinking very sad, especially because (it involves other people's enjoying happy life), but she is (bearing the hardship and suffering in the winter) to sell matches.
It is unfair !----(an expression of feeling)
The little girl is seen on the corner (lamenting for her tragic loss and tragic death).
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