~急~請幫忙改一下以下的文章,有中英對照,改英文的就好了,謝謝?

2017-08-17 10:11 am
The little girl got up and found herself back to the warm town, and when she saw her grandmother, she ran towards her." Grandmother!" The little girl said excitedly, "I'm doing well!Right?"But my grandmother blame to her "how can you be cheated by this trick!"The little girl looked puzzled and looked at her."You are blinded by your evil fantasies!" Grandma angrily cursed "You ruined the whole town!"The little girl took a deep breath and realized that she was doing too much. "I'm sorry ...""You have become a sinner, and even I can not save you." Grandma said sadly "you must be dead"
小女孩起身,發現自己又回到了溫暖的小鎮,她一看見奶奶,便朝她奔去。
「奶奶!」小女孩興奮的說「我做得很好!對不對?」
但奶奶卻是一臉責備「妳怎麼會被這種伎倆給騙了!」
小女孩一臉疑惑的看著她「什麼意思?」
「妳被妳的邪惡幻想給蒙蔽了!」奶奶憤怒的大罵「妳毀了整座小鎮!」
小女孩倒抽一口氣,驚覺自己做得太過分了「對不起…」
「妳已經變成了罪人,連我都救不了妳」奶奶悲傷的說「妳必須處死」

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2017-08-17 2:23 pm
The little girl got up and found herself back to the cozy town, and when she saw her grandmother, she ran towards her.
" Grandmother!" The little girl shouted excitedly, "I'm doing well! Right?" But her grandmother blame her "how could you be cheated by this trick!" The little girl looked puzzled and looked at her. "You are blinded by your evil fantasies!" Grandma angrily cursed "You ruined the whole town!" The little girl took a deep breath and realized what she did was overkill. "I'm sorry ..." "You have become a sinner, and I can’t even save you." Grandma said sadly "you must be punished to die".


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