Please type up an essay of at between 150 and 200 words outlining what you do and what you do not like about your city?

2017-08-07 4:17 am

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2017-08-09 3:08 pm
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Here's a template for your essay :

Topic Sentence (Cause + Effect sentences are suggested!)

- Set up some general knowledge
- State your opinion about your current city (e.g. Although [city name] [negative / positive reason], however [positive / negative reason])

Body Paragraph

- Evaluate your city :
o Write / explain three advantages / what you like
o Write / explain three disadvantages / what you dislike

Conclusion

- What is your overall opinion? Is it positive or negative?

Here's an example :

i.e.

[Set up context]

Cities used to be an undesirable place to live in due to their low socio-economic status, however as people moved from rural areas to urban areas due to a steady increase of jobs and available services, more development tended to occur there, making it a preferable place to live. [Write your opinion in this structure : Although {negative reason} still persists, {positive reason} {explain}.]
[Advantage 1] e.g. My city provides a wide range of opportunities for me, such as schools. This helps [give reason]
[Advantage 2]
[Advantage 3]
[Disadvantage 1] e.g. On the other hand, the amount of air pollution in the city causes illnesses to arise, such as asthma.
[Disadvantage 2]
[Disadvantage 3]
[Conclusion : 'In conclusion, my city is {what do you think of it?] because of [give a reason].
2017-08-07 4:27 am
I won't type about mine but if you need help writing about yours, you can type like this:
My city has its own good and bad that I'm going to explain in the current essay.
For one thing, my city is(state good things about it)..........
The other merit of living in my city is that(again..).........
One of the problems here in my city is that..............
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.(Conclusion, briefly mention the good and bad shortly and make sure you state the main point that you first mentioned eg. your thesis statement, though this is not a thesis!).
2017-08-07 4:24 am
I do not like that fact idiots who can't do their own homework live here. They also refuse to shower which makes them smell bad. I like Officer Bob because he drives me home from school and gives me candy and we have fun in his police car but tells me I'm not to tell mommy and daddy because it's a secret.
2017-08-07 4:31 am
do your own homework
2017-08-07 4:21 am
it's cool
2017-08-07 4:17 am
Pass.
2017-08-08 9:51 am
so you have to type up a essay on your city?

outline..... =>
LIKES =>
DISLIKES=>
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only YOU would know what you like and dislike
2017-08-07 11:39 am
The best thing would be to Google your city. Read and take point form notes on what you see as good and bad.
2017-08-08 8:37 pm
I think the question is pretty clear. Say what you like and don't like.

Here's the way to make it interesting.
- state the facts of the city
- end that first paragraph with what you are about to do, that is why the city is good
- next paragraph, bring up points why the city is bad
- now we enter why the city is good
- next paragraph, take down each bad point one by one; this is the counter
- summation, convince the reader that the city is great for a variety of reasons. This is more a recant of what was said before but condensed.

Basically play the bad before you play the good and slam the bad. It's a suspense thing. You voice agrees with the con, moves to the pro, then slams the con, and sum up in the finish.


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