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Here's a template for your essay :
Topic Sentence (Cause + Effect sentences are suggested!)
- Set up some general knowledge
- State your opinion about your current city (e.g. Although [city name] [negative / positive reason], however [positive / negative reason])
Body Paragraph
- Evaluate your city :
o Write / explain three advantages / what you like
o Write / explain three disadvantages / what you dislike
Conclusion
- What is your overall opinion? Is it positive or negative?
Here's an example :
i.e.
[Set up context]
Cities used to be an undesirable place to live in due to their low socio-economic status, however as people moved from rural areas to urban areas due to a steady increase of jobs and available services, more development tended to occur there, making it a preferable place to live. [Write your opinion in this structure : Although {negative reason} still persists, {positive reason} {explain}.]
[Advantage 1] e.g. My city provides a wide range of opportunities for me, such as schools. This helps [give reason]
[Advantage 2]
[Advantage 3]
[Disadvantage 1] e.g. On the other hand, the amount of air pollution in the city causes illnesses to arise, such as asthma.
[Disadvantage 2]
[Disadvantage 3]
[Conclusion : 'In conclusion, my city is {what do you think of it?] because of [give a reason].