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everyone needs job.and i'm no exception. (X)
Everyone needs a job and I am of no exception. (O)

i had been unemployed for a long time. (X)
I have been unemployed for a long time. (O)

i felt that life is meaningless. (X)
I felt life meaningless. (O)

i had a good very today. (X)
Everyday I have had is good. (O)

i attended a sales job interviewed for the fortress company. (X)
I went for a sales job interview at the fitness company. (O)

past tense
everyone needs a job and i'm not an exception.
i had been unemployed for a long time.
i felt that my life is meaningless.
i had a very good day today.
i have attended a salesman job interview of the fortress company.