Now i'm going to sleeping if you play tired Also go to sleep （現在傳這個訊息）現在我要去睡覺了如果你玩累了就去睡覺有英文大師可以幫忙看一下哪裡有錯嗎？

2017-05-03 2:28 am

請問各位英文達人
我這樣講英文有錯嗎？

回答 (5)

2017-05-03 12:57 pm

✔ 最佳答案

Now I'm going to bed. If you are tired of playing, you can also go to sleep.
英文有不重複的習慣，所以應避免相同的用語，兩句中的睡覺可以換個說法。

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2017-05-03 7:45 pm

妹有

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2017-05-03 5:24 am

Now i'm going to sleeping if you play tired Also go to sleep (X)

I'm turning in in a sec. Quit playing and go to bed soon, dude! (O)

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2017-05-03 4:22 pm

現在我要去睡覺了如果你玩累了就去睡覺
Now I am going to sleep, you keep on playing, if feel tired, you go to bed too.

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2017-05-03 4:34 am

As it is the time for me to go to bed when you do feel tired after playing then go to sleep as well. Yip

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