請幫忙英文 無錯位!!?

1. 大致無錯, 給你略為作了修改 :-

MTR is the main means of transport used by citizens everyday.
Mtr facilities and shops are more important, because it can easily meet the daily needs of the public.

2. 「 安全.服務.運輸都要有好的配套
在稱得上是一間好的 鐵路公司」: --

Good facilities for safety,services as well as transport should be included;
in order that it can be regarded as a fine railway company.

錯一部分, 給你略為作了修改
地鐵是主要的交通工具
公民每天都會使用
Mtr設施和商店更重要
因為它可以很容易地滿足公眾的日常需要

MTR is the main means of transport
Citizens are used everyday
Mtr facilities and shops are more important
Because it can easily meet the daily needs of the public