請問我下面兩句句子有文法錯誤嗎? 有的話應該怎麼改?

2017-04-08 2:23 pm
Common symptoms include Delusion、Hallucination,unclear or confused thinking, hearing voices that others do not hear, reduced social engagement and emotional expression.

also known as drug dependence is an adaptive state, including Physiological Dependence and Psychological Dependence,that develops from repeated drug administration,and which results in withdrawal upon cessation of drug use.

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2017-04-09 12:49 pm
Common symptoms such as Delusion, Hallucination, Confusion, and Auditory Hallucination, reduce patients' social engagement and emotional expression.

第二句有中文嗎?
2017-04-08 11:38 pm
It’s indeed a professional writing, which takes me a lot of time to check the dictionaries and Net to understand the meaning. I think your grammar is perfectly fine. While I check on the Net, just find, when “a delusion” and “a hallucination” are treated as diseases, some foreigners prefer to use plural noun. It may be not important, I just mention for your reference.


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