我的簡易自介有錯嗎?

It’s an honor to have this interview with you. My name is xxx and I am twenty-two years old. I have been having deep interest in interaction with foreigners since I was very young. So I forgo my leisure time to learn English hoping one day I can work at a foreign company. Although I have little experience in reception but I will get my job done, because I know, this is an important chance for my career.

1. It’s my pleasure通常用於別人對您的服務講感謝後，您的回復語，其意為樂於提供服務，不等於中文的自說自唱的榮幸，若要說中文的榮幸，不能照字面翻成 – it’s my honor, 要說it’s an honor
2. spend my leisure time 意為如何利用休閒時間，看你的意思好像是放棄娛樂時間 – 如是 - 可寫為forgo my leisure time
3. different countrys peoples 意思很怪，明顯是中式英文，簡單點用foreigners – 外國人
4. do my best to my job : 盡力作好工作 – 但也意味你可能沒能力做好。美語化些  I’ll get my job done – 我會把事情做完做好
5. 小錯實在太多，請用Word 或Google 先檢查語法並翻譯

It is my pleasure to have an interview with you. My name is XXX. When I was twenty two years old, I found that I was deeply interested in interaction with people in different countries. So I have spent my leisure time to learn foreign language and hope that I can become the staff of your company. Although I have little experience in the post of reception but I will try my best in this job if I am given a chance because I think that this job is important for me