What grade do you think I am in based on my essay, and what grade do you think this assignment deserves?

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[匿名]

2017-01-11 10:51 am

I got a 76 on this assignment and am not sure if my writing is just trash, or if my teacher may have graded a little too harshly. She has been rushed a lot to grade the essay due to the ending marking period soon. I will attach a document along with comments she left on the assignment. I believe she is right about some parts, but I think others are more justified. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yH-N6upPvzU7zBBFgPavpWgsCNfweY_lQ_KwjJ3eVUI/edit (Comments are at the bottom)

更新1:

I will be awarding a best answer

更新2:

I am in 9th grade English Honors

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[匿名]

2017-01-11 10:57 am

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I had to do an essay on "Of Mice and Men" recently, and I think your teacher was a little too strict on grading. I feel your essay flows quite well, and uses good wording. If I were a teacher, I would give an A-.

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[匿名]

2017-01-11 10:53 am

9th grade english amirite?

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用戶39626

2017-01-11 1:20 pm

"I got" and "a lot" is very lazy English ... so 8th, 9th, 10th ... and I will not second guess your teacher.
EDIT: If you think your teacher is too strict, wait until you get out into the working world(!)

參考: Many college essays

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[匿名]

2017-01-11 10:54 am

I would have given 86-89 on it. Your teacher was too strict.

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[匿名]

2017-01-14 11:42 am

"i got" and "a lot" is very lazy english ......... so 8th, 9th, 10th ......... and i shall not second guess your teacher...
edit: if you think your teacher is too strict, wait until you get out into the working world(!)

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[匿名]

2017-01-17 10:49 pm

I think your professor is fair.

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用戶67450

2017-01-11 12:29 pm

No title.
takes leverage over everything: doesn't make sense. Should be takes precedence over everything.
this theme of corrupt beliefs : You didn't mention any theme. Should have say society's corrupt influence above.

It goes on from there. I'd say your a sophomore with a B paper, or a senior with a C paper.

Overall, you're trying to hard. Using big words and long sentence trying to make it sound more advanced, but they are forced and don't always flow well together.

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[匿名]

2017-01-11 11:28 am

I would have given it a high B or a low A, maybe 88-90.
Your teacher is a little strict.

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