The rise was particularly noticeable between 1999 and 2002, during which time the use of mobile phones tripled.?

2016-12-01 4:12 pm
The rise was particularly noticeable between 1999 and 2002, during which time the use of mobile phones tripled.

我想問一下後面的which可以改成the嗎?
或者去掉which time
後面放triped是動詞改成過去分詞嗎?因為是補充說明的句子嗎?
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2016-12-01 5:25 pm
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The rise was particularly noticeable between 1999 and 2002, during which time (that) the use of mobile phones tripled.
= The rise was particularly noticeable between 1999 and 2002, during the time (that) the use of mobile phones tripled.
= The rise was particularly noticeable between 1999 and 2002 as the use of mobile phones tripled.
(as 是連接詞 = during the time that)

during which time 中的 which 意指 from 1999 to 2002,用during the time 也可以,此一限定 the time 即是前文所指 between 1999 and 2002. 但是寫作好壞的差異,即在這些枝微末節上,原句使用which 要比 the 好

1.) 我想問一下後面的which可以改成the嗎? ==> 可以
2.) 或者去掉which time ==> 不可以
3.) 後面放tripled是動詞改成過去分詞嗎?因為是補充說明的句子嗎? ==>不是,tripled 是過去式動詞
2016-12-01 4:30 pm
during which time=on which=on the date=when
triped=participle verbal adj. qualifying nn phr,(use of mobile phones),but retaining some properties of a verb=a participial adjective, the (tripled) use of mobile phones.
2016-12-02 2:51 am
during which time 不可改為 during the time
但可以改為during that time
因為that = 指上句1999-2002這段"時間"。

問題2假如你指寫成
during which time tripled.
文法上是可以的,但假如這樣全句便沒有"主體",因為句子的主詞會變成"The rise",而沒有寫出主體是甚麼rise了,主體其實是(the use of mobile phones)。除非全篇文章中上句已經說明The rise是在說The use of mobile phone,則全句更可以簡化為:
The rise was tripled between 1999 and 2002.
但這句便只是說出事實的資料,沒有作者似乎一層層地加重立體感地表達:
1999至2002年間的增幅特別明顯,當其時的流動電話數量增加了三倍。
把"年份"跟"當其時"重複要讀者注意多一次,先說"增幅明顯"描寫出質感,再實在一點地說出"三倍"的數量感。

這就是"寫作"技巧或style手法怎樣把一樣簡單的fact變為說明,再作為"文字的力量"。


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