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Nowadays, because of the high development of technology, the communication between people and people is also become easier. In the past, it was really hard for people to keep in touch with others without technology. People could only use letters, and did nothing but waiting for the letters for such a long time. On the contrary, nowadays there is so much communication software for us to communicate with others. We just have to press the keys, and our messages can be sent to any corner in the world immediately. In this high-tech era, communication is as easy as to turn my hand, and also make the connection between people and people more closely.