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2016-10-11 2:44 am
I’m going to a job fair tomorrow afternoon looking for another part time job! I’m already working around thirty hours, almost full time at my current job, but I still have a lot of time on my hands. I don’t know what jobs will be there, but I hope there’s a job I’ll like and be hired at! I would really appreciate the prayers and the luck, thanks!

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2016-10-11 3:26 am
Tomorrow afternoon I will attend a job fair to search for a part-time job. I work 30 hours a week in my current job and I have time available to work a part-time, second job. I would appreciate your prayers for me to land a job I will enjoy.


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