請幫我改這篇英文作文!!?

2016-10-10 5:55 pm
How to learn English
How to learn English is a big question on most senior high students also on me. Even I start to learn English in time of baby.Despite I learn English for sixteen years ,I still have poor English although I dream of being a English teacher .As a result I went to find some means to solve my problem.First I have to know a lot of vocabulary. Second I need to though reading to be familiar withEnglish. At last I need to do some out put,like talk in English or write English sentences. I will improve also can accomplish my dream.

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2016-10-10 7:37 pm
真的是寫得超爛的!不但是英語爛 內容也是超爛的.但是別擔心,我幫改以後就會變得超好的.

> How to learn English

> How to learn English is a big question on most senior high students also on me.
English proficiency has been a big problem to most senior high students, me included.

> Even I start to learn English in time of baby.
How in the world could this happen, considering the fact that I started learning English when I was a baby.
Literally, I have English blood flowing in my vein.

> Despite I learn English for sixteen years, I still have poor English although I dream of being a English teacher.
Despite of my poor English after 16 years of intensive learning, my dream of being a career English teacher remains intact.

> As a result I went to find some means to solve my problem.
Here is my delivery plan.

> First I have to know a lot of vocabulary.
First, I need to learn a lot of vocabularies by reading a lot of good books, National Inquiry, and Playboys, among them.

> Second I need to though reading to be familiar with English.
Secondly, I need to make myself familiar with how English is used by living with an American family for 3 years.

> At last I need to do some out put,like talk in English or write English sentences.
Lastly. nothing helps more than a lot of writings - I will make myself an online political reporter for Martian Independence Army. Twenty tweets a day should be enough for me to be as popular as Trump.

> I will improve also can accomplish my dream.
This way, I will be teaching English to your kids in no time.

Writer's notes:
1. Dude, do you have problem in differentiating "problems" from "questions"?
2. You need to be rich to subscribe to Playboys.
2016-10-10 9:14 pm
How to learn English
How to learn English is a big problem not only most senior high students but also for me. Even though I started to learn English in my childhood for sixteen years, and yet I still have poor English. Besides that I would like to be a English teacher. Then, I have tried to find some means to deal with that. Firstly, I have to remember a lot of vocabulary. Secondly, I need to go through reading to familiarize with my English. Finally I need to do some exercises,like talking English or write English compositions and as a result, I do hope that will be able to improve my English. Adjusted by Yip
2016-10-10 7:30 pm
How to learn English
"How to learn English" is a big question to most of the senior high school students and also to me. Even though I have learned English for sixteen years since I was a baby, my English is still very poor. However, I dream of being an English teacher someday. Therefore, I have been finding means to solve my problem. First, I would have to learn a lot of vocabularies. Second, I would need to read plenty of English books. At last I would need to put into practice to talk in English and write in English with others. By doing so, I will certainly improve my English so as to accomplish my dream.


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