Does this letter to my girlfriend who might want to break up soon sound well written and considerate?

What happened on her birthday?

Do you call and tell her if you are going to be late?

She does sound kind of demanding.

So do you have a concluding paragraph, you've said lots of things but I kind of feel like you should sum it up a bit better as far as things are heading, it all seems a bit up in the air. Although I guess to a large degree the ball is in her court?

It's a strange relationship these days.
this is a baby writing

no responsibility

no adult

nothing serious

just stolen from a chat from internet

why do u treat women as a piece of wood?