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Select the incorrect words in this passage to strike them out.
With the aim to of selecting the new conference venue, a primary and secondary research were carried out. First, whereas the conference requirements were acquired directly from the CCC organisation. Rental information next was then requested from the offices of the corresponding companies. This information was being collated for comparison. In the addition, the official Web site of the local transport authority was consulted and different transport options they were evaluated. Finally, a site visit and inspection of both the two proposed venues were carried out. Evaluation was then made from according to the criteria stated on in the introduction of this report.
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2016-06-20 12:30 pm
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2016-06-20 2:11 pm
Errors and Corrections are in enclosing brackets(-----) where incorrect words are striked out.
----With the aim (to) of selecting the new conference venue, a primary and secondary research were carried out.
----Firstly, (whereas) the conference requirements were acquired directly from the CCC organisation .
----Rental information (next) was then requested from( the offices of) the corresponding companies. This information was being collated for comparison.
----In (the) addition, the official Web site of the local transport authority was consulted.and different transport options (they) were evaluated.
----Finally, a site visit and inspection of both (the two) proposed venues were carried out.
----Evaluation was then made ( from ) according to the criteria stated (on) in the introduction of this report.
----With the aim (to) of selecting the new conference venue, a primary and secondary research were carried out.
----Firstly, (whereas) the conference requirements were acquired directly from the CCC organisation .
----Rental information (next) was then requested from( the offices of) the corresponding companies. This information was being collated for comparison.
----In (the) addition, the official Web site of the local transport authority was consulted.and different transport options (they) were evaluated.
----Finally, a site visit and inspection of both (the two) proposed venues were carried out.
----Evaluation was then made ( from ) according to the criteria stated (on) in the introduction of this report.
2016-06-21 2:20 am
With the aim [to] of selecting the new conference venue, a primary and secondary research were carried out. First, [whereas] the conference requirements were acquired directly from the CCC organisation. Rental information [next] was then requested from [the offices of] the corresponding companies. This information was being collated for comparison. In [the] addition, the official Web site of the local transport authority was consulted and different transport options [they] were evaluated. Finally, a site visit and inspection of both the two proposed venues were carried out. Evaluation was then made [from] according to the criteria stated [on] in the introduction of this report.
[-] is incorrect strike out.
[-] is incorrect strike out.
2016-06-20 12:39 pm
Corrected:
With the aim of selecting the new conference venue, a primary and secondary research were carried out. First, where as the conference requirements were acquired directly from the CCC organisation. Rental information next was then requested from the offices of the corresponding companies. This information was being collated for comparison. In the addition, the official Website of the 'Local Transport Authority' was consulted and different transport options were evaluated. Finally, a site visit and inspection of both the two proposed venues were carried out. Evaluation was then made from the criteria, stated on in the introduction of this report.
With the aim of selecting the new conference venue, a primary and secondary research were carried out. First, where as the conference requirements were acquired directly from the CCC organisation. Rental information next was then requested from the offices of the corresponding companies. This information was being collated for comparison. In the addition, the official Website of the 'Local Transport Authority' was consulted and different transport options were evaluated. Finally, a site visit and inspection of both the two proposed venues were carried out. Evaluation was then made from the criteria, stated on in the introduction of this report.
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