Good morning everybody today I will introduce a movie Up . It directed byPete Docter. The film centers on an elderly people living alone named Carl and an earnest young wilderness explorer named Russell. By tying thousands of balloons to his home.78 years old Carl sets out to achieve his dream to see the wilds of South America and to complete a promise made to his late wife, Ellie. Ultimately did Carl go adventure to finish his dream? Did his adventure successful ? Of course he went and the adventure was successuful.
In the film my favorite character is Russel. Because in the film he is a braved child. However he just had 8 years old, but he always alone to go to wilderness explore. If you were him can you do it? Do you want to try? If I was him I have not the courage to go adventure .But I want to try , in my reason it is awfully difficult and dangers . And I want to try because it is challenging as well as learn independence . Therefore he is my favorite character. From the film I learnt no matter how many difficult in the feature. We should not be too discouraged by failures . Do you get interest and attractive after to listen my present? If you had these feeling immediately go to watch this film. This is the end of my presentation thank you .
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2016-05-06 1:50 pm
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2016-05-06 7:08 pm
Errors and corrections are in brackets ,eg(----);
Present tense used might be indicating film viewing as a habit in presentation:-
----Good morning,everybody.
Today I will introduce a movie "Up". It (is) directed by Peter Docter. The film centers on an (elder person)living alone named "Carl", and an earnest young wilderness explorer named "Russell". By tying thousands of balloons to his (house),78 years old Carl sets out to achieve his dream to see the wilds of South America, and to complete a promise made to his late wife, "Ellie". Ultimately did Carl go adventure to (fulfil) his dream? Did his adventure successful? Of course he went and the adventure was successful.
----In the film, my favorite character is Russel. Because (he learns to be )a (brave) child (in the film). However he just had 8 years old,(yet) he always (endeavour) alone (with effort) to go to wilderness (to) explore. If you were him ,can you do it ? Do you want to try(despite the courage needed) ? But I want to try, (despite the fact that it would have been )awfully difficult and dangerous.And I want to try because it is challenging as well as (an endeavour to) learn independence. Therefore he is my favorite character. From the film, I learnt no matter how many difficulty in the (geographphical features of the district and subject- program in the film), we should not be too discouraged by failures (and make every endeavour to be successful). Do you get interested and attracted after (listening to ) my presentation ?If you (have) these feeling,(please) immediately go watch this film.This is the end of my presentation. Thank you (for your time and attention).
Present tense used might be indicating film viewing as a habit in presentation:-
----Good morning,everybody.
Today I will introduce a movie "Up". It (is) directed by Peter Docter. The film centers on an (elder person)living alone named "Carl", and an earnest young wilderness explorer named "Russell". By tying thousands of balloons to his (house),78 years old Carl sets out to achieve his dream to see the wilds of South America, and to complete a promise made to his late wife, "Ellie". Ultimately did Carl go adventure to (fulfil) his dream? Did his adventure successful? Of course he went and the adventure was successful.
----In the film, my favorite character is Russel. Because (he learns to be )a (brave) child (in the film). However he just had 8 years old,(yet) he always (endeavour) alone (with effort) to go to wilderness (to) explore. If you were him ,can you do it ? Do you want to try(despite the courage needed) ? But I want to try, (despite the fact that it would have been )awfully difficult and dangerous.And I want to try because it is challenging as well as (an endeavour to) learn independence. Therefore he is my favorite character. From the film, I learnt no matter how many difficulty in the (geographphical features of the district and subject- program in the film), we should not be too discouraged by failures (and make every endeavour to be successful). Do you get interested and attracted after (listening to ) my presentation ?If you (have) these feeling,(please) immediately go watch this film.This is the end of my presentation. Thank you (for your time and attention).
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