English Tense 一問?

我昨日visit ABC Department Store ，該Department Store 售買不同種類美麗裇衫。我昨日visit 該百貨商店，發覺有些種類既裇衫缺貨無得賣。

I visited ABC Department Store yesterday. Different kinds of beautiful shirts were sold at the department store.

想問問以上句子既tenses 有無用錯。