求改英文文法，需要在一份作業中打一段簡單介紹，老師強調英文文法不能有錯，所以如果有錯求大大幫我更改，感謝！?

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all in past tenses:-
---I did not travel around the world, (yet )I have been to many countries (since) an early age. When I got the camera, I ( loved taking photographies to )record anything that I have seen in my eyes. (As an amateur photograher), I (was) most interested in different cultures,(arts, beliefs, social institutions, characteristic of a community,race) such as the buildings and the temples. It could show peoples's daily (livelihood) in that country. I wanted to photograph this beautiful world (in pictures) in my view and share (with) others.

I have never travelled around the 
world, but I have been to many 
countries from an early age. When 
I get the camera, I have always been in the habit of recording anything that I have encountered with so as to lock good memories in my mind. 

I am most interested in a wide variety of 
cultures such as buildings and temples. They can show people's daily lives and civilization in 
that country, I want to photograph 
this beautiful world in my view 
and share this magnifience with my friends.????