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2016-03-08 1:36 pm
Hi
I would like to visit you & your son on Jun
I’ll come if it is convenient for you


我將拜訪你和你兒子,若你方便的話!!

回答 (6)

2016-03-08 3:00 pm
✔ 最佳答案
Hello;
I would like to visit you&your son on June 9,The Tuen-young Festival.

Is it convenient ,favourable to need you receiving my previous gifts then ?!

Truly,
Chris Wang.
2016-03-08 2:22 pm
Hi,
I would like to pay you and your son a visit sometime in June, if this does not trouble you too much.
2016-03-09 3:49 am
句式邏輯上其實不用分兩句的,因為I'll come=would like to visit you,所以嘗試先把兩組結合為一句便可以了。另外文法上唯一錯了"on Jun"。只要記住"月份"是一段日子(有很多日)所以意義上不是"on一日",是"in any day of the month",因此英語說month必定用"in Jun"的。

寫句:
If it is convenient for you and your son, I would like to visit in Jun.
2016-03-19 12:18 pm
Hello; 
I would like to visit you&your son on June 9,The Tuen-young Festival. 

Is it convenient ,favourable to need you receiving my previous gifts then ?! 

Truly, 
Chris Wang.
2016-03-09 8:23 am
Hi

May I know if it is convenient if I were to visit both you & your son somewhere in Jun.
2016-03-15 2:19 am
I would like to visit you and your son on June if it's convenient for you.


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