我英文吾好，有人可以幫我將自我介意簡化一點同詞語簡單一點，可易記一點。Thx?

My name is Xxx. I am 25 years old. I have been living with my parent in Tai Wai for over twenty years.
I graduated from xxxxx, with more than 4 years of jewellery retailing experience

I have been working at Emperor Watch & Jewellery for last two years, my general duties are helping customers by finding out their needs and giving reliable advises by providing related information to let them locate and select the right products.
With my experience in selling and communicate with others,I am confident in myself are qualify enough to handle the job position of XXX

I have a very strong interest in XXX, and hope to develop my career in the industry. it would be a great opportunity for me If I have the chance to be the part of the company,and Im sure i will be able to perform my best for the company within this post.

Thank you for your time