I am sorry, the conference room is unavailable at 3:15. but I reserve the conference room at 3:30-4:30 in 11/F for your meeting.?

2015-12-04 4:05 pm
我的文法有錯誤嗎?
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回答 (2)

2015-12-04 5:40 pm
文法有4錯:

1. "I am sorry."應該以句點結束ㄡ
2. "The conference room..." 要大寫.
3. "But I ..."要大寫
4. reserve 要改成: But I have reserved the conf....

語意有1錯:

5. "I am sorry."你又沒做錯事.不必道歉.

2個其他建議:
6. change "the conf room is unavailable" to "no conference room is available".
7. But 是可以用但是instead應該比較優.
2015-12-05 9:17 am
I am sorry. The conference room was unavailable at 3:15. so I reserved the conference room at 3:30-4:30 in 11/F for your meeting.


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