幫忙中翻英 謝謝!?

如果你每個禮拜都能完成15張訂單，歡迎加入我的公會。

If you're able to complete 15 deals of orders in every week, you're welcome to join my guild. ✍


謹供参考, 謝謝！????

Welcome to join my guild, if you can reach the goal of 15 orders per week.

如果你每個禮拜都能完成15張訂單，歡迎加入我的公會。

If you are able to complete 15 orders each week, you're welcome to join my guild.

如果你每個禮拜都能完成15張訂單，歡迎加入我的公會。
If you have the ability to finish 15 orders in every week, welcome to join our association(guild). (公會應不屬個人的，故改為”我們的公會”)

依據實務經驗，商用英文只要意思正確表達出來，不要發生行政及生產上的錯誤即可，並不必非常講究語法或外國道地的說法，因此並不會有"被打槍"這回事。

樓上兩位大大都用語言翻譯機 那講給外國人聽會被打槍

If you're able to complete 15 every week orders are welcome to join my guild.