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We have the following equipment which is damaged because of the frequent use and fragility.

Our service will be affected.

For maintaining good service, we are seeking help for judgement whether to repair or not.

If the item cannot be repaired, who makes the decision for purchase and what procedure should we do?


Thanks.
Jeffrey

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The following equipment is damaged because of frequent usage and torn material. Judging from the physical condition, we will give you some suggestions for your reference. If it is not worth of being repaired, would you tell me who can decide to buy another one and which application will be needed?

The following equipment are damaged due to frequent usage and material fatique.

Our services will be interrupted.
[influence=說服別人跟隨你，用affected都可以，但是你的內容似乎已經不能提供服務，所以不只是受影響，而是直接是”服務中斷了”吧]

To resume to normal operation, we need help to decide on the repair (or not).
[maintain = 維持/保養，由於設備已失效/損壞=不能運作，因此是要”恢復過來”或”還原”原有的運作功能]

If they cannot be repaired, who can make the decision to purchase new ones and what application procedure do we need?