可以幫我檢查我的英文句子有哪裡寫不好嗎?

[匿名]

2015-10-06 10:07 am

1.What kind of weather do you like the best when on vacation?
A: Winday day.Because windy day is very comfortable to go to everywhere, like camping, or just for a meal .
2.Have your vocation plans ever been spoiled by unpleasant weather?
A: There was once that I traveled to Miaoli(苗栗) with my friends of junior high school in my last summer vacation.
The weather of the first day was very great and we had a lot of fun.
We stayed in B&B which was in the mountains and talking about the destination of the second day.
However, when we woke up in the morning, the rain poured down outside the window, so we were trapped in the B&B and killed time by playing board games.

just for a meal有寫錯嗎?
在山上我記得mountain好像要加s? 要有the嗎?

(謝謝尼)

回答 (1)

Julie

2015-10-06 4:30 pm

✔ 最佳答案

1.What kind of weather do you like the best when [you are] on vacation?
A: Windy day. Because [it] is very comfortable to go [toX] everywhere [on a windy day], [for] camping, or just for a meal .

2.Have your vacation plans ever been spoiled by unpleasant weather?
A: [It happened] once [when] I traveled to Miaoli(苗栗) with my friends of junior high school in my last summer vacation.
The weather was very great [on the first day] and we had a lot of fun.
We stayed in B&B [X] in the mountains and [talked] about the destination of the second day.
However, when we woke up in the morning, the rain [was pouring] down outside the window. So, we were trapped in the B&B and [had to kill] time by playing board games.

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