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Hello everyone,
My name is XXX .
My first weakness is short supply of courage when it is needed.
I don't have enough courage to tell the teacher that she spoke Greek to me.
My second weakness is being too shy . I cannot take the initiative to talk with new classmates . But once we become friends ,I would be a good person to get along with.

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2015-07-29 22:59:19 補充：
My 3rd weakness is that I am easy to get nervous.
Especially when the person speaks to me in English,
I will be nervous to have cold sweats because I most likely will not understand what they say.

2015-07-29 23:01:38 補充：
My 4th is being finicky.
I know it is not good, but it has been how I kept myself mean and lean.

2015-07-29 23:04:12 補充：
However, I am also a girl of many strengths.
I am super good at keeping my word.
I do what I say, nothing less than that.

2015-07-29 23:08:24 補充：
But above all, I am super brainy and super cute.
These alone will make me a super rich millionaire when I grow up for sure.

shy是缺點，但courage不是（timidity才是）。為什麼要在演講裡向大眾公開你自己的缺點呢？

Error and correction in checking the Grammar:-
Hello everyone.
My Chinese name is XXX.
My first shortcoming is courage.
For example, I don't have courage with the teacher (to say) my English (is) very poor.So I could not understand what she said. "Bravery" is needed.
My second shortcoming is shy. I can not take the initiative to talk with new classmates.( I am a little awkward in company.)But if we become friends, I would be a good person to get along with.

2015-08-01 02:22:10 補充：
I 'll be keeping my word--my promise--my activities.Have a strong body+mind;strong will,imagination; and determination;THX