敬請大大協助修訂以下的翻譯內容:
主要問題在:
(1)應翻為 :
企業即可根據服務水準協定(SLA)及服務遞送協定,主動管理和自動監控業務和技術進度,
還是: 企業可以主動管理和自動監控業務和技術的服務水準協定(SLA)及服務遞送協定,
(2) accelerate adoption and to extend reporting 翻譯上有點頭暈
With CA Business Service Insight (CA BSI), organizations can proactively manage and automate monitoring of business and technology service level agreements (SLAs) and service delivery agreements. The solution provides real time visibility for service level management across your business and technology infrastructure to improve your understanding of the performance and cost implications of service agreements. CA BSI Implementation Services help enterprises and service providers to deploy the solution quickly, accelerate adoption and to extend reporting and solution integration to meet your requirements.
簽訂CA企業建置認知服務(CA BSI)後,企業即可根據服務水準協定(SLA)及服務遞送協定,主動管理和自動監控業務和技術進度,再透過業務和技術基礎設施即時觀察服務水平管理(SLM),讓您更加了解服務協定中有關性能和成本的實質內容。CA BSI建置服務協助企業和供應商快速部署解決方案,加速設備的採選和、擴大建置報告的範圍、整合滿足客戶需求的解決方案。