求幫忙檢查修改英文自述

Hi, guys, this is Amy.

My exposure to English started about 10 years ago and since then, the language never ceases to amaze me. I diligently practice English for about an hour daily in hope that I may be able to watch movie without subtitles and reading novels without dictionaries.

It also sometimes became challenging to me to allocate time for the learning. But it is also my firm belief that "no pain, no gain". So, in return, I won quite a few awards in English competitions.

My strengths, I think, is on vocabularies but I am admittedly quite weak in grammars. I also want to improve my oral skills and this camp may be able to help me to deliver. Ladies, I am super looking forward to practicing English with you all...

2015-06-14 00:46:31 補充：
What have I done this time???

I need someone with whom I could communicate(talk) in English.

2015-06-01 12:37:34 補充：
prisonress did it again.

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因為交通的發達123
所以我們想去地球上的任何一個地方
只需要坐著飛機幾乎都能抵達
這樣想感覺地球似乎很小123
但其實地球對很多人來說卻是無比的龐大這是因為語言的關係
我們會說中文其實是非常幸運的事情
地球上有超過十億的人口都是說中文的123
剩下的人口可能絕大多數
好幾十億人都是說英文的人口
所以我們只需要把英文學好
就可以自由自在的走遍全世界重點來了!!
在台灣 對很多人來說
學英文非常的困難
因為沒有學英文的環境與有效率學英文的方法像是今天背單字只是為了應付考試
過不到一個星期就忘記
遇到了外國人 往往只會說sorry跟thank you所以我想跟各位推薦一個超級多人推薦
而且讓你隨時隨地都能訓練英文的方法我有發現一個網址
有免費參加 限額100名的報名可以供你了解：
http://1314.ws/toeic
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TutorABC在世界上非常有名
如果你對英文有興趣想要學好
卻沒去聽過真的非常可惜
他是打造全英文環境
並且讓語言專家透過笑話與實例
實明解剖單字骨架
不需查字典，就能字彙大增
聰明學好英文而且因為他們是一對一的教學環境
所以可以為你量身訂作客製化課程
讓您一舉突破英文困境
(我覺得這很重要!!)如果說現在你會說很溜的英文
以及你本來就會說的中文
我相信不管你到哪個國家
不管是哪一間公司
都會非常受歡迎以及感受到人生的不同
我想你仔細想一下一定也會這麼想。
所以不妨花個時間去報名試聽看看
網址：http://1314.ws/toeic以上網址只需正確填寫簡單的資料
(如下圖)
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就會有專人主動為你服務
(所以千萬別填錯囉!! 希望聽過後可以改變你的人生) 111

Errors and Corrections:-
All corrections are found in the brackets(------):-
Odd sentences and odd vocab are thrown away:-
My name is Amy. I have been learning Eng. for 10 years.
Learning foreign (=Eng.) language is an interesting (and fascinating) thing to me. I practice Eng. half to one hour every day(not in order to-----but (for improving my skill)---)
(I can watch movies or read novels without subtitles)
Learning Eng. is a challenge for me,
It takes a lot of practice to speak the language well.
There is a lot of good practice, earnings and achievement every day.
I love English a lot.
Although I memorized number of words and do my best to learn Eng. Grammar, it doesn't improve my speaking.
(=Learning grammar doesn't improve my level of Oral-presentation, but getting worse)
(=Adding +why not recite by memorize carefully Eng. Grammar, sentence by sentence ?)

Hope to meet penpals+ friends in Eng.communication(Not many people who I can communicate with English....)

Hope to learn more Eng. culture (Not foreign culture, Not in this valuable experience.) so that cultural differences between the two (---) communities are known.Thanks for your time and attention;the guest of honor.

2015-05-30 01:24:44 補充：
(1)getting worse" and worse"
(2)who I can communicate with"in" Eng="in Eng.Communication".
Thanks.

2015-06-02 04:46:00 補充：
(3)If this CAMP help me(Amy) to speak Eng.grammar, then recitation of saying literature Grammar that I've learned to you audience.Reading Grammar=Speaking Grammar. THX.

1. getting more and more worse -> getting worse and worse
2. who I can communicate with English -> who I can communicate with in English