I'm a staff working in Marketing department of a company. Now I need to send a e-mail to Vandy, a CFO of the parent company. My English not good, I'm worry about if too much error on grammar is not polite to Vandy. Please assist to correct. Here is my sentence:
Please find the ABC report from marketing.
Please note that the Product C customer number is in estimation, we will update to actual figure if released before 30 June 2015.
please assist to correct my grammar?
2015-05-24 8:40 am
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2015-05-24 1:03 pm
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Attached please find the ABC report from Marketing. (It's the name of the department, so it's capitalized.)
Please note that the Product C customer number is an estimate. We will update to the actual figure if it is released before 30 June 2015.
2015-05-24 10:28 am
Please find the ABC report from marketing.
Please note that the Product C customer number is an estimate- we will update to the actual figure if released before 30 June 2015.
Please note that the Product C customer number is an estimate- we will update to the actual figure if released before 30 June 2015.
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