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Your tenses are correct but it is too boring. It will be better:

Today, I visited Apple Street first. The street was long so I was really tired. Then I visited Orange Street. I find that the surface of the street was uneven.

Here's what I'd do:

The first thing I did today was to visit Apple Street. When I got there, I found out
that the street was longer than what I expected! After a long and tiring walk, I found myself at Orange Street. The surface of the street was uneven, so I had to watch
my step.

TENSE isn't everything! There are many other aspects when it comes to learning Englsih.

It is correct to use Simple Past tense to describe events in the past.

發覺條路長
I thought (that) the road was long.

我發現左條街路面不平
I found (that) the road was bumpy.

Here is the recap of my journey today:
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I first went to Apple Street. I thought it was really long. Then I went to Orange Street. As I walked along the road, I found it very bumpy.

present perfect continuous:-
Today I have been visiting Apple St.for too long, longing for an Apple Computer.
Then I have been visiting Orange St. for uneven pavements extending up to present unperfect condition too long for my having a longing for an Orange Computer.

Your sentences was very bored and not vivid . So , I let it very vivid and longer than the other one .

Today , I visited Apple Street first . I think the street was the longest road that I have seen already.I felt bored and very tired so I visited Orange road . I discover the street of the pavement was uneven.