求中譯英一則 15點

長矛從我髮際掠過，
A spear sweeps through my hairs
近得如同愛人的氣息。
Closer than a breathing distance of my lover
如果唯有死亡能讓愛情不滅，
If death solely can make love sustains forever
我願以鮮血交換永不分離。
I would rather exchange with blood for external companionship

2015-03-21 23:32:47 補充：
我願以鮮血交換永不分離。
I would rather exchange （with要刪掉） blood for external companionship

這段話不是也有原文的嗎?

The Archilles' Poem15 without Google:-

Piercing spear lancing through by my hair

Almost closer than my lover's breathing air

Should it be death that makes love sustenable,

Take my blood&life as an eternal pair.

長矛從我髮際掠過，
spear slices through by my hair
近得如同愛人的氣息。
closer than my lover's breathing air
如果唯有死亡能讓愛情不滅，
should it be death that sustains amore
我願以鮮血交換永不分離。
take my blood and my life for an eternal pair