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2015-03-14 10:56 pm
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在香港這個生活節奏急速和繁忙的城市,市民的睡眠時數嚴重偏低,長期睡眠不足,是引發重病的高危因素,與高血壓、心臟病、中風、糖尿病、肥胖、精神病、腦力衰退甚至兒童發育障礙等有密切關係

我們還透過這次活動提升我們小組的團隊合作、個人膽量和與陌生人溝通的技巧。
在活動舉行前我們要經過大量的討論和分析這次活動的目標和可行性,在討論過程中每位組員都提供出不同的意見,像其中一位組員ManMan 她之前參與過類似的活動,所以可以給到我們保貴的意見。
因為活動是在一處人流非常多的室外地方舉行,所以需要很大勇氣。在活動舉行途中也有對我們活動感興趣的途人,經過與他們的聊天和講解活動的目標從而增進我們的溝通技巧

我們的團隊最大的優點是勇於突破,班裹其他組別都選擇在學校舉行活動,而我們選擇在人流非常多的室外與行。而缺點就是組員大多是被動的人,可能需要其中一個人先提出意見其他人才會提出意見。我覺得要改善這個缺點,我們可以多參加一些團體活動,例如在放學後參加一些學校舉辦的工作坊和一些學會的活動,因為不發表意見大多是害羞的關係,多接觸其他人可以有效改善我們的缺點。

我的優點是有很多想法,在這次活動中我提出了很多不同的想法,倒如舉行活動的地點、時間、方式和難題等等。而缺點就是我是一個比較懶惰的人,當組員分配了不同的工作,我往往是最後一個完成的人。為了改善這個缺點,我會重新安排我的時間表,倒如:減少我每天的娛樂時間,把時間用在學習跟重要的時情上。

在這次活動中我們遇到的困難是我們舉行活動的地點人流太多,活動當天我們到了舉行活動的地點,發現人流太多根本沒辦法在那裡舉行活動,最後我們選擇更改我們的活動地點,去一個人流適中和有足夠地方給我們舉行活動的地方。

回答 (4)

2015-03-14 11:43 pm
✔ 最佳答案
In this fast-paced and hectic life of the city, members of the public of sleep time is seriously low, chronic lack of sleep, the cause of the illness risk factors linked to hypertension, heart disease, stroke, diabetes, obesity, mental illness, mental or developmental disorders in children are related to the recession


Through this activity we also enhance our teamwork, personal courage and skills in communicating with strangers.

In the event we go through a lot of discussions and analysis before the event's goals and feasibility of, during the discussion of each team to provide different views, as one Member ManMan before she participated in similar events, so you can give us your comments.

Because the activity is held in one point is more of an outdoor place, so it took a lot of courage. Campaign also has interest in our activities passers-by on the way, after chatting with them and explain the activities aim to improve our communication skills


Great advantage of our team is the courage to break through class wrapping other groups chose to hold activities in schools, and we chose abortion many outdoor and rows. But the disadvantage is that team members are mostly passive person, you may need one person to comment other people will give their views. I think we have to improve on the shortcomings, we can take part in group activities, such as after school to participate in workshops organized by the school and the activities of certain associations, because the comments were mostly shy of that exposure to others can improve our shortcomings.

2015-03-14 15:44:47 補充:
My advantage is that there is a lot of ideas, in this case I came up with a lot of different ideas, such as place, time and manner of activities and puzzles, and so on. But the disadvantage is that I am a lazy person, when the crew assigned different jobs, I is often the last person to finish.
2015-03-18 6:59 pm


As we know that life in Hong Kong was always a busy city and kept buzzing along; as the result, nearly all the residents suffered from shortage of hours and long period of sleep respectively. That were something to do with the diseases such as hypertension, heart diseases, stroke, diabetes, obesity, mental illness, deficiency in thinking and even concerning the physically retarded children.
Through that kind of activities, we would raise such teamwork up in case of co-operation as well, and then to emphasize personal bravery and communication with a stranger.
It was necessary for us to have lengthy discussion and analysis on its goal and possibility of that event, in addition, each personnel should raise one's idea or comments during that period, i.e. like one of the personnel named Man Man who had participated such activity previously and that'll offer us a lot of valuable idea as well.
Owing to the outdoor activities, it was necessary for us to be brave and courageous in front of all strangers who was being interested so as to communicate and discuss with them respectively; in addition to that'll improve commnicational skills among both of us and them.
In regards to our teamwork, our team was as good as others and within our class; in other team which would select to participate that activities outside the school. Also, we selected to that outside in order to prevent from traffic jam. Not only there was defective but also all of them being passive. In such case, it was necessary for us to improve this defect by asking one of them to raise idea and I felt that was regarding shyness. First of all, it was better to communicate with others in order to be improve our defect.
It was my good idea that would have lots of thoughts, within this activities having raised lots of ideas and thoughts; such as establishing different place, timing, form and difficulties etc. It was the defect that I was rather lazy indeed.

參考: Myself and dictionary
2015-03-16 1:28 am
In the Hong Kong this rhythm of life rapidly and the busy city, resident's sleep hour serious somewhat low, the long-term sleep is insufficient, is initiates serious illness the high-risk factor, with hypertension, heart disease, the stroke, diabetes, obese, neurosis, the mental ability declines even the child development barrier and so on to have the close relation

we also to penetrate this activity to promote our group the team cooperation, individual guts and the skill which communicates with the stranger.
We must pass through the massive discussions before the active hold and analyze this active the goal and the feasibility, each byte all provides the different opinion in the discussion process, likely byte ManMan in front of her has participated in the similar activity, therefore may give us to guarantee the expensive opinion.
Because the activity is holds in stream of people extremely many outdoor places, therefore needs the very big courage.On the way also has the passer-by in the active hold who moves to us is interested, thus passes through promotes our communication skill with theirs chat with the explanation activity goal

our team biggest merit is dares to break through, the class binds other groups not to choose in school hold, but we choose in the stream of people extremely many outdoor and the line.But the shortcoming is group mostly is the passive person, possible need person to propose first the opinion other talented people can give the comment.I thought must improve this shortcoming, we may participate in some association activity, for example after is on vacation from school participates in the labor workshop and some academic society's activity which some schools conduct, because does not express the opinion mostly is the shy relations, contacts other people to be possible to improve our shortcoming effectively.
參考: ME
2015-03-15 5:16 am
In this fast pace of life in Hong Kong and the busy city , the number of hours of sleep people's grossly inadequate long sleep , is a serious illness caused by risk factors, and high blood pressure , heart disease , stroke, diabetes , obesity , mental illness, mental decline and even children closely related developmental disorders

We also enhance the teamwork of our team through this activity , personal courage and skills to communicate with strangers .
Before the event we go through a lot of discussion and analysis of the objectives and the feasibility of the event , during the discussion of each team member to provide different views , like one of the crew ManMan she participated in similar activities before , so you can to protect our valuable advice .
Because the event was held in a very large crowd at outdoor places , so they need a lot of courage . On the way events held there interested in our activities passers goal after chatting with them and explain the activities thus enhancing our communication skills
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