20點!緊急!英文好既唔該幫幫手!!

由於我gpa太差, 依家面臨被踢出校既危機,我寫咗封求情信,可唔可以幫我睇下有咩地方可以寫得好啲等啲prof會更同情我既case而比多次機會我...thx...

To Committees of the Board of Examiners,

I am X, I was put on academic probation but failed to lift the probation at the end of the probated semester.

According to the student handbook 2013/14, my study would be discontinued. But I really want to strive for a last chance.

I admit that my main problem is poor time management. After being admitted to X, I joinned the squash team and from that time, squash was like the main part of my life and I was not paying enough time on my study. When I received the warning letter at the end of the semester 2 of year 1, I knew that I must be hard-working in the next semester, but at the same time, X got a good draw in the inter-school squash competition, which means it is very possible for us to finish in the fifth place, the best result so far. I really want to fight for my school and strive for best result. I trained a lot more and finally we beated X who was in sixth place last year, and we are on our way to the fifth. Therefore, I put only a little time more on studying. At last, I got a minor improvement only to semester GPA 2.00. I am really disappointed and regretful with this result.

Now, I fully understand the meaning of programme GPA and the requirement of X. I promise that I would put all of my efforts and be much more hard-working for my study.

I really hope that you could give me a last chance. I am truly regretful and would change wholeheartedly from now on. At the end of this semester, I would prove that I am worth this chance by showing significant improvement in my results.

Thank you for taking your time and consideration.

Yours faithfully,
XX