中翻譯英~15分~急

何小姐工作積極、認真、仔細；
Ms Ho has a positive attitude towards her job. She's serious and detail-minded.
堅持原則；
She can always uphold principles.
也有團隊合作精神強；
Also has a good team spirit (team spirit 不是strong的）
責任心強；
A very responsible person
和工作能力：能按時完成工作任務。
For her capability, she can always accomplish tasks on time.
唯一要improve的是粗心大意
The only thing she can make some improvement on is her carlessness.

註：原文的內容很散亂，欠缺層次。其中既然何小姐＂工作積極、認真、仔細＂，又怎會是＂粗心大意＂呢？

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2015-01-26 12:07:22 補充：
仔細的操心大意.

TCP - Transmission Control Protocol?
Or "should pay more attention to avoid careless mistakes".
There's more than one way to skin a cow. Sorry veggie.

何小姐工作積極、認真、仔細；堅持原則；也有團隊合作精神強；責任心強；和工作能力：能按時完成工作任務。唯一要improve的是粗心大意
Miss Ho motivated, conscientious and careful; adhere to the principle; there are strong team spirit; strong sense of responsibility; and the ability to work: to complete the task on time. The only thing to improve is carelessness

何小姐工作積極、認真、仔細；堅持原則；也有團隊合作精神強；責任心強；和工作能力：能按時完成工作任務。唯一要improve的是粗心大意

Ms Ho works seriously, and carefully, she follows the basic rules, her team spirit is strong, and she is very responsible. She can finish her duty on time. The only thing that she needs to improve is she is absentminded.

何小姐工作積極、認真、仔細；堅持原則；也有團隊合作精神強；責任心強；和工作能力：能按時完成工作任務。唯一要improve的是粗心大意 =Miss Ho motivated, conscientious and careful; adhere to the principle; there are strong team spirit; strong sense of responsibility; and the ability to work: to complete the task on time. The only thing to improve is carelessness

回答者： pc 問得好, "仔細" 相對是"粗心大意"
If Miss Ho does meticulous work, how can she churn out sloppy work?
我想發問者自己作出來居多, 思維有點凌亂

回答者：Son 使用軟件 translate
翻譯出來懶得修正, 文法錯漏百出

2015-01-24 05:28:57 補充：
"唯一要improve的是粗心大意" ~ 相信是錯
Just a suggestion, "唯一要改善是不再粗心大意"
請請 tcp 如何 improve 粗心大意? 更加粗心大意 ?
"The only thing to improve is carelessness" ~ 錯
代入負面字 anger, arrogance, selfishness, greed ~ 很怪
應該用中性的字 improve the performance, working attitude, working condition 比較好

2015-01-26 23:30:09 補充：
意見者：Rocketman:

Well said!

何小姐工作積極、認真、仔細；堅持原則；也有團隊合作精神強；責任心強；和工作能力：能按時完成工作任務。唯一要improve的是粗心大意
Miss Ho had doing things carefully, considerably and directly; but insists on principle; absolutely strong on responsibility; and owned working ability; could do and finish the assignment in time. And her solely improvement being do thing in a hurry.

2015-01-23 11:24:43 補充：
Amendment: And her needed improvement is to prevent from doing things too carelessly.

中文
何小姐工作積極、認真、仔細；堅持原則；也有團隊合作精神強；責任心強；和工作能力：能按時完成工作任務。唯一要improve的是粗心大意
翻譯為英文
Miss Ho motivated, conscientious and careful; adhere to the principle; there are strong team spirit; strong sense of responsibility; and the ability to work: to complete the task on time. The only thing to improve is carelessness