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我要抓緊在美國讀書的機會。

由於我的經濟課不合格，所以我要repeat 我的經濟課。我是否一個差的學生？

我在美國生活很開心因為我在這裏認識到很多朋友透過教會。
我也在學校認識到很多朋友。
我已經拿到了五個A在我的學業成績，但是我還有4個A和十個B要拿。
我要讀60個學分才能轉到大學，現在我只有20個學分。
我在學習方面有壓力。
翻譯為為英文
I would like to seize the opportunity to study in the United States.

As my economics class failed, so I want to repeat my economics class. Whether I'm a poor student?

I am very happy living in the United States because I know a lot of friends here through the church.
I also recognize that many school friends.
I've got five A in my academic performance, but I have four A and B to bring ten.
I have to read 60 credits in order to go to college, and now I only have 20 credits.
I have pressure in learning.

我要抓緊在美國讀書的機會。

由於我的經濟課不合格，所以我要repeat 我的經濟課。我是否一個差的學生？

我在美國生活很開心因為我在這裏認識到很多朋友透過教會。
我也在學校認識到很多朋友。
我已經拿到了五個A在我的學業成績，但是我還有4個A和十個B要拿。
我要讀60個學分才能轉到大學，現在我只有20個學分。
我在學習方面有壓力。

I have to grasp any opportunity in pursuing my studies in the States.

Since I failed the examination in Economics, I had to take the Economics course again. Am I a poor student? (我唔知"我是否一個差的學生？"係咪一個must 的message, 但如果係關於學業的申請 / send 俾老的訊息, 個人認為咁寫好怪, 你可以考慮delete)

I enjoyed my time in the States a lot as I met many good friends in church gatherings, as well as in school. Although I have achieved 5As in my courses, I still got 4 more As and 10 more Bs to go. Now I need 60 credits to get into university, which I only got 20, still a long way to go. That is why I got some pressure in academics

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Godfrey 真是一個有心、有力、盡責的好老師！

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我要抓緊在美國讀書的機會。
I have to seize the opportunity to study in the United States.

由於我的經濟課不合格，所以我要repeat 我的經濟課。我是否一個差的學生？
Because I failed my Economics course, I have to retake that course. Am I a poor student?

我在美國生活很開心因為我在這裏認識到很多朋友透過教會。
I am more than pleased with my life in the United States because I come to know many friends here through the church.

我也在學校認識到很多朋友。
I also make many friends at school.

我已經拿到了五個A在我的學業成績，但是我還有4個A和十個B要拿。
I have scored five A’s in my academic performance, but I still have four A’s and ten B’s to achieve.

我要讀60個學分才能轉到大學，現在我只有20個學分。
I need to secure 60 credits in order to transfer to a university. For the time being, I only have 20 credits.

我在學習方面有壓力。
I have been under a lot of stress in my learning.
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認同意I思A ( 知識長 ) 多次建議, 使用 Google translate 而全不修正的嚴重錯誤.

"As my economics class failed, so I want to repeat my economics class."
我的經濟學課程那一班 failed, 是否上課突然停課取消, 導師心髒病發作或 越讀越少學生

"I also recognize that many school friends."
認出舊時的 school friends ?

"I've got five A in my academic performance, but I have four A and B to bring ten."
four A and B = 4個A和 1個B就夠 10 個 what?
A 是單數, A’s 是複數

"to go to college" ~ 錯, university 才是大學
~ 可能發問者讀 community college, 60個學分才能轉到大學

最後只希望發問者: sun 回應. 多個回答者中, 挑選一個適合自己, 謝謝


2015-02-05 01:33:56 補充：
To Calmatoˇ☪◦ °:

Rachmaninoff ~ Rhapsody on a theme of Paganini 與 Saint-Saëns ~ The Swan 很好聽!
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保重!