升中個人檔案

要,例如My hobbies is playing football and running.
但係呢句 I do them everyday.就唔洗,因為有everyday.
你可以用I like/My favourite activites is playing football and running.
建議加一啲supporting details(支持句)同一啲adverb(助詞)
如上,My hobbies is playing football and running.I love them very much.
I do them everyday.我係中一學生,1月先interview完。

祝君好運,可以入到心儀中學

要,如 playing football,running.
但係 everyday.就唔洗,因為有everyday.
你可以用I like/My favourite activites is playing football and running.
如上,My hobbies is playing football and running.I love them very much.
I do them everyday.
祝你可以入到心儀中學

如樓主,Hobbies / Interests 如Reading, Drawing當然係要轉進行式 ,而住址就唔洗.我係f.1學生.唔好填錯個人檔案.

2014-12-26 10:49:21 補充：
生日日期都要

Hobbies / Interests 如Reading, Drawing當然係要轉進行式