Help ! 英文翻譯!

你的message很cliche.
不如直接簡潔啲講：

I will stop being cliche and being ridiculous, please forgive me of all the miscomings.

I just want to hear from you or get connected with you once again.

I'm twenty three going on twenty four, wanting to go the Korea on my thirtieth; I truely hoping to meet up with you in Korea by then.

你好, 我衷心想說一句對不起，我無理取鬧的性格，令到你生氣。對不起！我不知道我可以做甚麼才令你對我有一個好印象，但願你不要生氣。我知道你巳經原諒了我100或多個100 次，你可不可以原諒我最後一次？我答應你我不會再這樣對你。
Hello, How are you? I'm heartily apologized to say sorry about my behavior of making trouble and let you angry. Very sorry , I don't know what can I do so as let you have a good impression on me; but do wish you don't be angry. I do know that you have already forgiven me one hundred times or even more and will you do the last one ? I'm pledged to you that'll be never happened again.
我真的很想與你説話通過電郵和Facebook ，可以嗎？
I'm really eager for conversation with you via email and Facebook, couldn't I?
我真的很想與你聽到你的聲音，可以嗎？
I'm really eager for contact and hearing your voice, couldn't I?
我承認我很容易相信我的朋友。所以我的Facebook遭到我的香港朋友盜用我了。
I admited that being too easy to trust my friends, as a result, my friends had stolen the information in my Facebook.
我會30歲會去韓國旅行。
I will join the tour of Korea in my thirty years of age.
如果你有空，我可不可以與你約會在韓國？
Perhaps, if you got leisure, won't you meet me in South Korea ?
我真的很想與你遊玩在韓國和與你吃飯，可以嗎？
I'm really eager for touring and dining out with you, couldn't I ?
我現在23歲。
I'm twenty three years of age.

Hello,I want to say sorry heartily.I made you angry because of my unreasonable.Sorry!I don't know what should I do to make a good impression on you.Hope you will not feel angry.I know you forgave me many times,even 100 times or more than that.Can you forgive me the last time? I promise,I will not do this thing to you again.I really want to talk to you by email and Facebook.Can I? I really want to listen to your voice.Can I ? I admission that I believe my friends easily so my Facebook account stole by my friend in Hong Kong.I will travel to Korea when I am 30.If you have time,can I date you in Korea? I really want to go sightseeing and have a meal with you.Can I? I'm now 23 years old.

1. You are good, my heart thought said sorry, I create a scene the disposition, causes you to be angry.Sorry! I did not know what I can make only then to make you to have a good impression to me, hopes you not to have to be angry.I knew your sixth branch after has forgiven me 100 or many 100 times, can you forgive my last time? I promise your me not to be able again like this to you.
I really very want to pass the charging with your 説 speech to post with Facebook, may?
I really very want to hear your sound with you, may?
I acknowledged I very easy to believe the friend of mine.Therefore my Facebook encountered me the Hong Kong friend to embezzle me.
I meet 30 years old to be able to go to South Korea to travel.
If you have free time, I can and your appointment in South Korea?
I really very want to play with you in South Korea and eat meal with you, may?
I now 23 years old.

2. Hello, I sincerely want to say I'm sorry, I vexatious character, to make you angry. I'm sorry! I do not know what can I do to make you have a good impression on me, I hope you do not get angry. I know you already started to forgive me 100 or more than 100 times, can you forgive me for the last time? I promise you I will not do that to you.
I really want to talk to you via e-mail and Facebook, can I?
I really want to hear your voice and you, can I?
I admit that I can easily believe my friend. So I met my friends in Hong Kong Facebook theft me.
I will be 30 years old to travel to South Korea.
If you have time, can I be with you dating in Korea?
I really want to play with you and with your meal in Korea, can I?
I am now 23 years old.

Hello, I sincerely want to say I'm sorry, I vexatious character, to make you angry. I'm sorry! I do not know what can I do to make you have a good impression on me, I hope you do not get angry. I know you already started to forgive me 100 or more than 100 times, can you forgive me for the last time? I promise you I will not do that to you.
I really want to talk to you via e-mail and Facebook, can I?
I really want to hear your voice and you, can I?
I admit that I can easily believe my friend. So I met my friends in Hong Kong Facebook theft me.
I will be 30 years old to travel to South Korea.
If you have time, can I be with you dating in Korea?
I really want to play with you and with your meal in Korea, can I?
I am now 23 years old.

Hello, I want to say I'm sorry, blaming nature, makes you angry. I am sorry! I don't know what I can do to make you have a good impression of me, I hope you don't take offense. I know you have forgiven me 100 or more 100 times, can you forgive me for the last time? I promise you I won't do the same for you.
I really want to talk to you via email and Facebook, right?
I really want to be with you to hear your voice, right?
I admit that it's easy for me to believe my friend. So my Facebook I stole my friends in Hong Kong.
I will be 30 years old to go to Korea trip.
If you have time, can I ask you out in Korea?
I really want you to play in Korea and eat with you, OK?
I am 23 years old.

Hello, I want to say I'm sorry, blaming nature, makes you angry. I am sorry! I don't know what I can do to make you have a good impression of me, I hope you don't take offense. I know you have forgiven me 100 or more 100 times, can you forgive me for the last time? I promise you I won't do the same for you.
I really want to talk to you via email and Facebook, right?
I really want to be with you to hear your voice, right?
I admit that it's easy for me to believe my friend. So my Facebook I stole my friends in Hong Kong.
I will be 30 years old to go to Korea trip.
If you have time, can I ask you out in Korea?
I really want you to play in Korea and eat with you, OK?
I am 23 years old.

中文
你好, 我衷心想說一句對不起，我無理取鬧的性格，令到你生氣。對不起！我不知道我可以做甚麼才令你對我有一個好印象，但願你不要生氣。我知道你巳經原諒了我100或多個100 次，你可不可以原諒我最後一次？我答應你我不會再這樣對你。
我真的很想與你説話通過電郵和Facebook ，可以嗎？
我真的很想與你聽到你的聲音，可以嗎？
我承認我很容易相信我的朋友。所以我的Facebook遭到我的香港朋友盜用我了。
我會30歲會去韓國旅行。
如果你有空，我可不可以與你約會在韓國？
我真的很想與你遊玩在韓國和與你吃飯，可以嗎？
我現在23歲。
翻譯為英文
Hello, I want to say I'm sorry, blaming nature, makes you angry. I am sorry! I don't know what I can do to make you have a good impression of me, I hope you don't take offense. I know you have forgiven me 100 or more 100 times, can you forgive me for the last time? I promise you I won't do the same for you.
I really want to talk to you via email and Facebook, right?
I really want to be with you to hear your voice, right?
I admit that it's easy for me to believe my friend. So my Facebook I stole my friends in Hong Kong.
I will be 30 years old to go to Korea trip.
If you have time, can I ask you out in Korea?
I really want you to play in Korea and eat with you, OK?
I am 23 years old.
希望對你有幫助!

Hello, I sincerely want to say sorry about my vexatious character that have made you angry. I'm sorry! I do not know what can I do to earn your good impression on me, I hope you do not get angry anymore. I know you have already forgiven me 100 or more than 100 times, could you forgive me for the last time? I promise you that I will not treat you in the same way again.
I really want to talk to you via e-mail and Facebook, could I?
I really want to hear from you and your voice, could I?
I admit that I can easily trust my friends. So the identity of my Facebook was stolen for use by my friends in Hong Kong.
I will travel to South Korea by 30 years old.
If you were available, could I have a dating with you in Korea?
I really want to play with you in Korea and have meals together with you, could I?
I am now 23 years old.

P.S. If you prefer using common wordings to replace „vexatious“, you may use „unreasonable and quarrelsome“ instead.

中文
你好, 我衷心想說一句對不起，我無理取鬧的性格，令到你生氣。對不起！我不知道我可以做甚麼才令你對我有一個好印象，但願你不要生氣。我知道你巳經原諒了我100或多個100 次，你可不可以原諒我最後一次？我答應你我不會再這樣對你。
我真的很想與你説話通過電郵和Facebook ，可以嗎？
我真的很想與你聽到你的聲音，可以嗎？
我承認我很容易相信我的朋友。所以我的Facebook遭到我的香港朋友盜用我了。
我會30歲會去韓國旅行。
如果你有空，我可不可以與你約會在韓國？
我真的很想與你遊玩在韓國和與你吃飯，可以嗎？
我現在23歲。
翻譯為英文
Hello, I want to say I'm sorry, blaming nature, makes you angry. I am sorry! I don't know what I can do to make you have a good impression of me, I hope you don't take offense. I know you have forgiven me 100 or more 100 times, can you forgive me for the last time? I promise you I won't do the same for you.
I really want to talk to you via email and Facebook, right?
I really want to be with you to hear your voice, right?
I admit that it's easy for me to believe my friend. So my Facebook I stole my friends in Hong Kong.
I will be 30 years old to go to Korea trip.
If you have time, can I ask you out in Korea?
I really want you to play in Korea and eat with you, OK?
I am 23 years old.